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Wednesday, June 27, 2007

噤

薄履踏灰階
風竊松香抱入懷
秋月，難埋

風來一點思
撫月狂歌賦新詞
夜思，難平

光轉魚雁寄
書意未窮難入寐
君心，難留

57 comments:

The Inner Space said...: 都話小朱姐是才女喇﹐都唔記得講了幾多次﹐不過小朱姐唔會話我o尋氣o瓜。; June 27, 2007 12:24 PM
Old Cake said...: Second what space just said!; June 27, 2007 12:30 PM
The Inner Space said...: 應該是四段的﹐才算完整﹐
不寫的一段﹐是留給有心人補足...　

我不敢亂加一段!; June 27, 2007 12:33 PM
Anonymous said...: 招，總要有人發.

***

樂樂篇

火中長頸鶴
呆望眼前少鈕兒
七十，難明

＊＊＊

盈盈篇

人民幣債券
票面三厘搏升值
兩年，難跌

＊＊＊

渣估篇

白加士之虎
雨夜傾心一夜情
整晚，難眠

＊＊＊

丹尼篇

日出光滿天
路邊有一間旅店
此曲，難再

＊＊＊

志明篇

小三遇阿妹
細水長流當年情
一生，難忘; June 27, 2007 1:22 PM
米 said...: 何故傷感？; June 27, 2007 1:25 PM
Todd said...: 細心的看，默默的領會。

原想應題而不語，但，又盼留下半點支持。
我想，我仍是偏執得很。; June 27, 2007 1:43 PM
C.M. said...: 獨個伊人憂
早來笑臉待夜愁
妹意，難斷; June 27, 2007 1:47 PM
The Inner Space said...: 嘩嘩..我不用拋磚就已經有咁多
美玉出來....正正正!; June 27, 2007 2:23 PM
新鮮人 said...: 雨下夜難眠,
樹影雨聲伴窗前,
笑卿.多情

ps:失禮哂! :p; June 27, 2007 2:29 PM
seikomatic said...: 俺中意 happy ending:

夜未門輕敲
使君纙香半推就
相思，夢湊; June 27, 2007 4:11 PM
Anonymous said...: 仲有：

七十篇(一)

七十換新工
行政管理再整頓
問題，難搞

七十篇(二)

七十遷新居
別了小島換怪屋
蟲蟲，難滅

阿妹篇

笑問丁志明
獨訪香閨溫功課
心事，難言

米搞篇

彩筆繪阿妹
志明在旁仿新雅
插畫，難忘

C.M.篇

六六斷腸時
結婚週年無心載
騾肉，難吃; June 27, 2007 5:48 PM
C.M. said...: 咳咳！咳咳！咳咳！咳咳！咳咳！咳咳！咳咳！咳咳！咳咳！咳咳！咳咳！咳咳！咳咳！; June 27, 2007 6:15 PM
英倫肥龍 said...: This comment has been removed by the author.; June 27, 2007 11:01 PM
英倫肥龍 said...: 嘩, 咁熱鬧! 雖然晏咗啲, 我又想加一份.

月照漁港畔
夜深人靜思前程
變化，難捺; June 27, 2007 11:04 PM
Anonymous said...: 小珠妹妹：

志明飯局（二）之涼拌茄子

經已出版; June 28, 2007 12:43 AM
lu said...: xiao zhu, 你做咩又瞓唔著? :(; June 28, 2007 12:51 AM
. said...: 南國有佳人
憑窗凝望苦思魂
錦書，難托; June 28, 2007 10:37 AM
马铃薯比基尼妹妹 said...: 哇，厉害; June 28, 2007 12:00 PM
Haricot 微豆 said...: 精彩徘句!!!!; June 28, 2007 1:43 PM
vicky said...: "君心，難留"

好傷感...; June 28, 2007 5:07 PM
英倫肥龍 said...: 燒豬, 好忙?; June 28, 2007 9:44 PM
The Inner Space said...: 肥龍相信不是見小朱姐到處都有留言我想她是等緊那位登出佢為小朱姐寫的第四段!; June 28, 2007 10:47 PM
xiao zhu said...: Space:

真係冇你收呀！多謝你定係要話你呢? 話你又唔係，唔話你又唔係。

呢兩日我突然跌左watt,唔知應該點樣回覆留言之嘛，所以咪冇出現囉。吓，你幾時做左義工咁好呀，喺度做埋解讀添呀? ：P; June 28, 2007 11:49 PM
xiao zhu said...: 老餅：

你都係童軍黎架咩? 多謝呀！^^; June 28, 2007 11:52 PM
xiao zhu said...: 魔術師：

見你詩興大發，欲罷不能喎！我都覺得好榮幸呀，而且睇得好過癮呀！^_; June 28, 2007 11:57 PM
xiao zhu said...: 米搞：

你咁問，你叫我點答你好呢！; June 28, 2007 11:58 PM
xiao zhu said...: Todd：

果然係知己喎！心照。

p.s.我weekend 會再整，今次落少啲木瓜。; June 29, 2007 12:00 AM
xiao zhu said...: C.M.、新鮮、精工大師、肥龍、量子：

多謝你哋和我嘅詩，我真係喜出望外！我好鍾意呀。真架！~_~; June 29, 2007 12:05 AM
xiao zhu said...: Lu：

諗嘢囉！：P; June 29, 2007 12:07 AM
xiao zhu said...: 杉：

歡迎你呀！得閒多啲黎坐。：）; June 29, 2007 12:08 AM
xiao zhu said...: 微豆：

我驚我又表錯情呀，你讚邊個先，講清楚好啲喎！ =P; June 29, 2007 12:10 AM
xiao zhu said...: Vicky,

Miss you arrrr!; June 29, 2007 12:11 AM
xiao zhu said...: 感君細意趨
輕撫寸心還拭淚
謝意，難言

小妹蒙諸君關懷，銘感五內，特此謝過。; June 29, 2007 12:15 AM
The Inner Space said...: 小朱姐:

挖返到您出來回應咁多位阿哥阿姐﹐畀您話兩句罵下又點話﹐我都是薯鳩做義工當平常!; June 29, 2007 12:17 AM
The Inner Space said...: 小朱姐文思敏銳﹐有眼見喇﹐第四段
她自接作結。; June 29, 2007 12:27 AM
xiao zhu said...: Space：

你又...蝦！我幾時有罵你唧?

你又幫我解畫，咩自接呀，我見咁多朋友賞面喺我度留左咁多墨寶，所以寫番呢段多謝大家，包括埋你架！你真係吖。; June 29, 2007 12:34 AM
xiao zhu said...: Space:

畀你搞到我爭啲唔記得講呀，你唔好再叫我咩才女喇。聽落好骨痺架！

第一，我真係唔係，唔可以亂認。第二，而家唔識寫字嘅都話係才女，我諗喺你心目中我又未至於咁下嘛！; June 29, 2007 12:40 AM
The Inner Space said...: 小朱姐:
您唔罵我﹐好喇多謝!
明天搬埋我舊磚出來!; June 29, 2007 12:45 AM
xiao zhu said...: Space:

點解要等聽日唧，就而家喇。; June 29, 2007 12:47 AM
Old Cake said...: Xiao Zhu,
I just wanted to thank you for adding my blog on your list. (Just saw my name on the list two mins ago) I am honoured and delighted.

Thank you,; June 29, 2007 2:11 AM
xiao zhu said...: Old Cake,

It's been there for some time la. 你唔好咁客氣啦，我都冇同你講多謝。:P; June 29, 2007 10:20 AM
Haricot 微豆 said...: Xiao Zhu: 不用驚,当然包括您啦!!

俺也將拙作放在這裡,湊湊熱鬧。

【夏日】
木棉楓樹蔭
徘言絕句兩岸通
一笑,心思!

【兄弟吟】
同根散兩葉
兄弟兩岸尋生計
成功、失敗?

(以上兩岸是指太平洋)

【臨懸】
官場路埼嶇
澣林駿馬躍五環
轉好!轉好!

【初戀】
熱吻難捨棄
咆吼吹斷連理枝
楓葉....,飄雪....。; June 29, 2007 11:25 AM
xiao zhu said...: 微豆：

我幾無賴，咁問法，你想唔讚我都唔得喇！哈哈！

而家先至出招！其實我真係要跟你學習呀。; June 29, 2007 1:21 PM
Todd said...: 我週未都再整，得唔得再話你知。; June 29, 2007 2:54 PM
米 said...: 星期一放假
游水畫畫踏單車
希望，天晴; June 29, 2007 5:25 PM
xiao zhu said...: Todd：

好！^^; June 29, 2007 5:29 PM
xiao zhu said...: 米搞：

未來3日天氣預告--

30/6 星期六
多雲有雨及有幾陣狂風雷暴

1/7 星期日
多雲有雨及有幾陣狂風雷暴

2/7 星期一
多雲，有零散驟雨

自己執生啦喎！ Happy holiday！！^_; June 29, 2007 5:33 PM
米 said...: 香港天文台
落雨行雷打大風
經常，唔準; June 29, 2007 6:04 PM
C.M. said...: 小珠：

嗯。（Bye!）; June 29, 2007 7:28 PM
Anonymous said...: 心結難解。
很好的詩呢。; June 29, 2007 8:54 PM
The Inner Space said...: 薄履踏灰階
風竊松香抱入懷
秋月，難埋

風來一點思
撫月狂歌賦新詞
夜思，難平

光轉魚雁寄
書意未窮難入寐
君心，難留

鏡花影窗前
水月飛花驚破曉
郎情﹐難辯

落日照影長
倚窗遙望添紅妝
妾意﹐難藏

嘆一聲二聲
三聲四聲到十聲
鬱結﹐難舒

磚頭很重 ~~ 搬出來時~~沙石甚多; June 30, 2007 11:37 AM
Anonymous said...: 唱千言萬語
一遍二遍千萬遍
歌聲﹐難頂; June 30, 2007 9:01 PM
xiao zhu said...: Space:

如此美玉相贈，無言、再謝！; June 30, 2007 11:02 PM
xiao zhu said...: 匿名朋友：

情意若真，如何難頂之歌聲都可撫慰心靈。

謝謝！; June 30, 2007 11:05 PM
xiao zhu said...: 亞占：

還是忍不住。

心結，難解?; June 30, 2007 11:45 PM
macy said...: 嘩! 高手過招,精彩,精彩.; July 03, 2007 1:49 AM
xiao zhu said...: Macy：

我呢度真係黎左好多高手呀！！; July 03, 2007 3:29 AM

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