xiao zhu lai le: 暮思

Wednesday, January 14, 2009

西山夕照不堪留
冷風還托一襟愁
雲散霧斂不見月
星落燭殘淚空流

Anonymous said...: 寒風凜冽幾時休
白雪飄凌欺白晝
人生三十當立業
江山冰封志未籌

第三句 alternate

寒風凜冽幾時休
白雪飄凌欺白晝
自古男兒當立業
江山冰封志未籌

space頓首 orz; January 14, 2009 10:22 PM
Morca said...: 咁凍, 飲多杯熱嘢啦!; January 14, 2009 11:00 PM
Anonymous said...: 日暮猶溫倚山傾
月臨初冷掛天瑩
憑欄回首多番淚
點滴風寒盡化冰; January 15, 2009 2:39 AM
Anonymous said...: 但看斜陽依嶺盡
冰輪不見掛雲來
催更淚燭難回首
且待朝暉上玉臺; January 15, 2009 11:27 AM
新鮮人 said...: 東海朝陽海上升
暖意依襟一心明
雲散霧斂明日天
志定心明日月仰; January 15, 2009 2:23 PM
xiao zhu said...: Space：

你都咁傷感咁嘅? 志未籌? 你仲後生！; January 16, 2009 4:36 PM
xiao zhu said...: Morca：

唔知點解，人人都話凍，我都唔覺好凍咁嘅。可能裡面凍過外邊，所以唔覺。; January 16, 2009 4:40 PM
xiao zhu said...: Shek：

你總是不忘給我正面的鼓勵，謝謝！; January 16, 2009 4:44 PM
xiao zhu said...: 新鮮：

喜歡冬天的太陽，因為特別容易令人振奮。; January 16, 2009 4:48 PM